Wow. ( )

1/5

Absolute drivel.

I thought the beginning of this was very powerful. I had really high hopes in the first half, but the relationship did not develop in ways that worked for me. It just seemed unrealistic and over the top. (Also, the way that people are only interested in one another because they are touch starved made me sigh longingly for regency era romance.)

Also? Morally bankrupt Hermione only works if she is more shrewd and callous and less complicit imo

ALSO ALSO????? WHY DIDNT THEY EVER TALK ABOUT HOW MALFOY WAS GONNA LOSE HIS MIND ABOUT BEING A FATHER UNTIL AFTER! THE BABY! WAS BORN!?!??!?? Dude. These people are NOT equipped to be parents. They need to go to family therapy first.

reading update:
876 page fanfiction? Light work ( )

Phew. That was... a hell of a story. ( )