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Cargando... Baitpor Amelita Rae
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This is the second book by this author I’ve read, the other being, The Good Doctor, and I enjoyed this one more. The reason was this one had a plot and was more romantic, even though it contained what I consider a rape scene. Ishida ties Jinsei up and forces him to have sex even though Jinsei tells him he’s a virgin and Ishida doesn’t take it easy on Jinsei. Ishida does pleasure him, but Jinsei is still forced and Ishida does it bareback, which makes it worse. After the final conflict scene happens, Jinsei confronts Ishida about the rape. Unfortunately, he’s easily swayed that it was okay when Ishida kisses him. Then, something happens even more importantly so Jinsei forgives Ishida. I won’t reveal the reason, but I understand how Jinsei felt that a payment of having Ishida rape him was nothing compared to what Ishida did for Jinsei in return. By the end of the story, it isn’t just sexual attraction between the two that keeps them together. They care deeply for each other, and that’s why I liked this story better than the other book I read.
What we learn about Jinsei is that he’s very beautiful and steals cars for Shibata who is Yakuza. Ishida knows this and its fun watching the plot unfold and how it ends up. This is a lust at first sight story, which ends in a HEA. I hoped the grammar issues from the other book would’ve lessened in this one, but it didn’t happen. There still were odd pov shifts and it seemed the pov shifts between characters were much more prevalent in this book than in the other book. Sometimes they happened every few paragraphs.
In the end, I liked this plot better, and I liked the characters better. Jinsei wasn’t a complete pushover. However, the grammar errors were still quite frequent and the author needs to get better betas and an editor. I give Bait: A Yaoi Adventure, 3 Stars