Well... my biggest issues with this was the insta-love, which I'm not a huge fan of, and also the fitting of this to Nocturne Falls. I feel like the writer wanted to connect this to her own series, which would be ok, but my issue was that the rules for vampires in NF series is obviously different. And I didn't like this rewriting of the rules. I would've preferred a clean story within this universe.

And then, yes, there is one more thing: the female and male stereotyping. I feel Nocturne Falls is pretty good in this regard with women actually being friends and not just competing who gets the guy and reduced to cardboard cutouts and also it's positively surprising in the lack of macho men. So, I was slightly disappointed in this regard. This wasn't the worst ever that I've read, but in comparison of the normal quality of NF, I would've wished something better. ( )