What I liked:

How General whatsisname wasn't made out to be the "bad guy" just because he had a different POV than the protagonists.

Reads like Doom 2- the giant cyborg at the end was scary & the smaller ones reminded me of the Imps

Cliffhanger at the end made things interesting

What I didn't like:

Reads like doom 2

Many instances of muddled up character POVs

Needs editing

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