For a story only a few pages long, it had just enough story packed into it for a few minute enjoyable read.

There was one error near the middle that jarred the flow momentarily. For a work as short as this, even one error can change the overall experience. Also, the ending was predictable enough mainly because there are many erotic stories out there with this exact ending. I felt that if I hadn't read the last bit, my overall enjoyment would have been more.

But still, overall, it was worth checking out and if it's a taste of this author's other work, I'll be see what else she has to offer. ( )