Lane Whitt

I gave this book three stars even though technically I should have only given it too. The reason is this it's very juvenile. It seems written by a 5 year old lol. Not necessarily written but more narrated. The young girl doesn't have social cues and I can understand this being the reason why it sounds so juvenile and immature however she has all this life lessons life history plus this memory that is like you know photographic memory is that how you say it? Anyway, she has never ever bypassed a book about women's health? I highly doubt that. And she's never read a book about sexuality? I doubt that too because she said that she read every book in the library. So she's read every book in the library it stands to reason that she has read about sexual health. Correct?

The reason that I gave it three stars is because I like the dynamic of the guys. I like her backstory, for the most part. And I really want to see where this goes even though the grammar is killing me.

The person that wrote this book obviously is not english. Cuz even British English would have not made the same mistakes that were in this book.

actually the grammar is why I probably would have only given it two stars. But I figured it's my first experience with this writer I'll give her the benefit of the doubt for this book only.

Even stating all of this I'm still going to give book to a chance because I do want to see what the hell is going on.

I know as far as grammar goes, I'm using a voice to text program so if by chance there's something above that doesn't make sense, like a sentence that doesn't make sense, there's a very good chance that Google screwed it up. Feel free to message me if you're confused about anything that's said above because I am too lazy to fix it right now lol.… (más)

So for the people that read my reviews, I will admit that I actually like this book better than the second book. There was still some humping and grinding but it wasn't overpowering. Just enough.

Now for the things I did not like. The fact that they kept on calling the grandfather Marcus when that's not his name. Marcus was the evil uncle. So why did they keep on screwing up and calling maksim, Marcus?

Also there were several grammar issues. Things that are so simple and can actually be corrected on any software.

And then calling the children different names. That drove me insane. Like Asher. At one point they called him Ashton. That kind of thing drives a person and saying.

Also there is a point in book 3 where they state that kitten has never given head before. However in book 2 she does to finn. In the library. Where she gets boned by Kellen and blows Finn. Yes I know that was a little adult there but whatever.

Attention to detail throughout her book when she was proofreading probably would have been much more appreciated.

All that aside I gave it an extra star because I actually did like the end of this book. Actually I like the entire book but the ending was my favorite.

Now I have to wonder, is there another book after this? I'm so confused. Or is it a spin-off? And is it completed? I guess I'm going to find out huh?… (más)