Michelle Means
Autor de Boys Must Obey
Obras de Michelle Means
His Promise 1 copia
Broken In 1 copia
Etiquetado
Conocimiento común
- Nombre canónico
- Means, Michelle
- Ocupaciones
- author
writer
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The idea of the story was actually good. Execution was bad. There was too much flabbergasting about female supremacy, but the mind control therapy was entirely unrealistic. I have read some amateurish writing at literotica far better than this one.
In first story bad characterization entirely destroyed this story early on. It was said that the two main characters were best friends since many years, and had been supportive to each other. They supposedly know each other pretty well. Then one of them starts acting entirely mean, and the other doesn't seem to know her at all. The writer seems to be confused about the characters herself.
Second story was completely boring.
Must be avoided by all fans of Michelle Means.
Second story was completely boring.
Must be avoided by all fans of Michelle Means.
Estadísticas
- Obras
- 11
- Miembros
- 13
- Popularidad
- #774,335
- Valoración
- 2.6
- Reseñas
- 3
Problem is that the story needs heavy editing. There are some spelling mistakes. But what makes it kind of irritating that there is too much repetition of sentences, along with unimportant lengthy additions that has no role with the main story. That makes the story kind of very boring at places. Much of that should be skimmed or edited for fast-fun reading. If that would have done, the book would be 5 stars for sure.… (más)