Amara Lynn

I read this having previously read a novella by Amara Lynn, which I thoroughly enjoyed.

This one felt rougher for me than Tundras. The story was there – it's such a strong concept. In a human world wasted by a war between demons and angels, people eke out a living in tiny enclaves. They hide from demons, keeping to themselves.

Rom is half angel, raised by his human father and angel mother – until at some point, his mother left. She has yet to return, but Rom still hopes. Yuli is half demon, raised by their human mother.

The story is great. Unfortunately, the editing felt rushed. Not the spelling and grammar, but the clarity. There were sentences I had to read and re-read multiple times because I couldn't understand what was meant. Also, the story is narrated in turns by Rom and Yuli – and their voices were too similar. It took me most of a chapter to realise, I'd switched heads.

It's almost there, but a bit more polish is needed.… (más)