L. Leander

This did not hold my attention AT ALL. For the most part I was extremely distracted by the poor editing. Nobody else has complained in their reviews, so I'm assuming it must have been a flaw on the version I downloaded on my Kindle. For example on almost every single page there are words missing at the beginning of a sentence. Instead of saying "I had a twinge of guilt...." - It says "Had a twinge of guilt...." or instead of saying "I realized it was easier.....:" It reads "Realized it was easier.....". Maybe it's suppose to be showing that she is a country bumpkin but it just wasn't consistent enough. All the other sentences were fine
I usually try not to judge a book by its editing and rarely does it bother me, but this one drove me insane !… (más)