Fred Finley

Story idea is good. There are also numerous very good scenes of Femdom. And I'm really impressed by the author's daring of attacking so many religions so intensely at the same time. However, there is one big problem with this book. Most of the preaching in the book is without properly study of the religious books, history and the myths discussed. There is just too much rubbish presented as authentic facts, which soon enough, starts creating irritation and frustration. If Fred had kept the preaching part to minimum, based on his capacity of historical and religious study, then this could have become a great Femdom Erotica. It could even become a masterpiece. Only reason giving it two stars instead of one is because of the good Femdom scenes. However, I think this is his worst book. I will highly recommend to skip this book and read one of the other books of Fred, as he has written some great Femdom Erotica.… (más)

I am femdom erotica reader. But I'm not much into Pet-Play. And I'm surely not into bestiality. And therefore I would have never picked this story. But I really like another story of this author so I gave it a chance. I'm glad I did so. Although there is only mild aspect of femdom in this, the story is pretty well written. There is tension at specific times and the there is also good humor regularly. Furthermore, the author has considered deeply about various possibilities and scenarios for most situations and have answered those sooner or later with the story. There are two weaknesses though. The story needs some serious proof reading. Also, the story was far fetched. The last four or five chapters should have skimmed into one or two, because over there the story started feeling repetition. But overall it's a very good story. And for someone deeply into Pet-Play Femdom Erotica, this might be pure gem.… (más)

Boring! And disappointing too, as some of the books of Fred Finley I've read were really good. The idea of this book was good as well. But the execution is entirely absurd. For a Femdom Erotica too many of the scenes are created with male slaves torturing other male slaves. Furthermore, the scenes involving females interacting males are not dramatized at all. Those are told in straight narrations. There is also too much focus on war and battle, which could be fun if that was for rolling the story forward. But here that's the main subject, and kind of very irritating. I would recommend skipping this book and instead pick another one of Fred Finley. He has written several good stories.… (más)

Boring! And disappointing too, as some of the books of Fred Finley I've read were really good. The idea of this book was good as well. But the execution is entirely absurd. For a Femdom Erotica too many of the scenes are created with male slaves torturing other male slaves. Furthermore, the scenes involving females interacting males are not dramatized at all. Those are told in straight narrations. There is also too much focus on war and battle, which could be fun if that was for rolling the story forward. But here that's the main subject, and kind of very irritating. I would recommend skipping this book and instead pick another one of Fred Finley. He has written several good stories.… (más)