The story is brilliant, hot, and horrible. The heroine is hopeless in my opinion. What virgin would want what she wants? But she is a good negotiator....she got what she wanted. Elijah is very complex and mysterious. What happened to him to make him have to be so totally in control and does he realize that he has no control when it comes to Abigail?

Sigh, I guess I will never know because this is the end for me. Not because I don't want to continue but because I refuse to continue. And that is sad. I love the story and the characters. And I do want to know. But this author is doing a great disservice to her readers.

The author is basically charging over $40 for the first 12 parts. The so called 'Part' is about 50 pages. This is robbery....plain and simple. Write the FRACKING BOOK! Charge a decent price for it...it will sale! Shame on Hannah Ford! I see she has another serial of 26 parts that isn't finished either...Shame on her! It would have been a really good book!

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