Jayla Williams

I received a free copy from the Early Reviewers in The Library Thing.

I will begin by saying that the whole plot was quite interesting, the development of the story was, in a way, logical and that's what kept me reading. I didn't mind that their romantic relationship happened so fast (right after she finds out they had been childhood friends), but perhaps a bit more of their day-to-day activities or things they did together would've been nice to read.

As for the 'how' it is written, this was a conflicting point for me. Too many changes in the POV, grammar, and spelling mistakes. I do believe some of the POV changes were obsolete and could've been avoided with a conversation. There were also too many 'flashbacks', those were confusing with the storyline since some of them were placed one after the other with different timelines.

All in all, it is not a bad book, but it needs some work.… (más)

I personally don't care to much for the fantasy type of novel and book but I was surprised how much I enjoyed this book. This book had a lot of errors and I wish the author went through and proofread/edited it once more. I also don't like when a story has multiple backstories I do like a flashback but these seemed to have dragged on and I started to loose interest at certain parts. This story isn't like many I read it was nice to see the build up in relationship between the human and the orc. I do like a steamy novel this one didn't shy away from those. I did like this read and I would purchase a a hard copy if the mistakes were edited and the storyline were smoother. GOOD READ!!!… (más)