Ted Stetson

Wow. I usually try not to write such a negative review. But, I just cannot help wondering what in the world I just read. Realistically, this was more flash fiction than anything else. And I generally have no objection to that. I have seen some beautifully written flash fiction. But this? This really should have seen another pair of eyes before the author hit the publish page.

It is an interesting premise. An asteroid headed for Earth could mean the end of the world. I had hoped the author would have done more with it, and yet I found this really lacking. The editing issues are glaring. Their when the word there should be, things like that.

Overall, I was sorely disappointed with this particular story.… (más)

This was the true meaning of a short story.

A story of love finding you again.

A story of love many of us wish we had with that one we lost. The one that treated us right but got away.

There's not much to describe because it was so short, but it made me smile.

It jumped quite a bit and had a little "confusing" part of whether she was still in the car or at home because it didn't mention her making it home. It sped through the story but I still liked it.

It told kind of like a person would summarize how they reunited with their ill old flame or new flame.… (más)