W. D. Newman

I found this story fun and delightful, a nice read for young adults and middle grade ages. It took a few beginning chapters to stimulate a real interest in Ben Alderman's adventure; the writing could be improved with editing. But as soon as the curious main character stepped through a Merlin tree hidden on his grandparents' farm, depositing him in the world of Camelot, my interest was irreversibly perked. The story became enticing, and I found myself pondering throughout the day W.D. Newman's enjoyable magical characters--fairies, dwarfs, elves, snakers, wizards and witches. The book has many appealing personalities--especially the elves in my opinion--whom you would seek out as friends. I recommend this book to young readers and to the young at heart.… (más)

This is the second adventure for Ben Alderman, his sister, and his grandmother in a world of elves, dwarfs, witches, wizards, gnomes, and, oh yes--fire-breathing dragons. I love the other-world fantasy created by the author,especially the unique cultures that set apart each mythical race. Newman's stories are fun and imaginative, perfect for young readers. My few complaints: While the conflict resolution was creative, it seemed too fast resolved. I expected more of a challenge--a battle with the dragon to show off the power and strength of this formidable enemy. It seemed he hardly made an appearance before his defeat. Also, the writing could use some professional editing, but I found it easy enough to overlook and enjoy the creativity of Mr. Newman's story. I'm curious as to what adventure now awaits young Ben Alderman.… (más)