Valia Lind
Autor de Simplicity
Series
Obras de Valia Lind
Shadow of the Fae 8 copias
Tempest Witch 2 copias
Scarred by Vengeance 1 copia
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Miembros
Reseñas
Estadísticas
- Obras
- 27
- Miembros
- 102
- Popularidad
- #187,251
- Valoración
- 3.9
- Reseñas
- 6
- ISBNs
- 13
"Remembering Majyk" presents a interesting mix of Russian folklore and magic, but ultimately failed to deliver a powerful punch. The writing style is poor- overly descriptive of minor movements characters make, using predictable dialogue, and consistently bland sentence structure. The pacing is also uneven, with dramatic moments and quieter moments occurring at strange intervals.
40% into the book isn't that much different than 15% into the book: still very few answers, only hints at what's really going on, and a lot of flirty back-and-forth.
This is minor, but it also does the cheap have-character-look-into-a-mirror-to-describe-herself-in-great-detail.. Then it goes another step further into predictability and describes "the only possibly interesting things" about Cal being her eyes- which happen to change colors a lot. This is so overdone in books, especially YA titles, and it was a bad sign of where this book was going for me. I just felt like Cal was underdeveloped at best and fell into too many character tropes at worst. The romance was also dull- the relationship and the love interest. I didn't feel any spark between the characters!
If the writing was strengthened (and made less cheesy) and the characters were more fleshed out, this would be a much better book! The plot is there and pretty engaging, but it was difficult to be interested in the plot when everything else felt like sub par fan-fiction.… (más)