I liked this one much better than the first one. The premise was a little different in that the hero decided to acquire a wife by having his lawyers pick one working off of a bullet list. But of course the girl they pick is the evil one of a set of twins who talks her sister into following through with the marriage without telling our heroine, the good twin, that she had committed her to bearing a child and giving it up to him. She was sweet and I liked the way she kept the hero off balance. I would have liked there to have been a bit more of the story during their honeymoon where they fell in love. That part was a whole bunch of telling rather than showing. I think it was a result of too much story to tell in the amount of space available in the HP format. So the first 2/3rds of the book was wonderful with all the scenes fully shown in action and dialog. The last part half was not as good but all together I liked it. ( )