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Ninguno Actualmente no hay Conversaciones sobre este libro.  wildwily | May 28, 2020 |   There was very good writing here. But the world-building was flawed and detracted from the whole. A lot of focus was placed on the crossbow and then it essentially disappeared from the novel. This happened a lot: things were central and important and then they stopped being mentioned. I also take issue with the MC. She was very MarySue without being MarySue. Rich, distant parents who lavished her with money, yet she has none of the expected hang ups of entitlement. Survivalist training? The character was too unbelievable. Not enough time was spent developing the ‘rift’ story and the Kvstm(?). No noticeable typos. A few instances of knowledge suddenly present that had no source. In the end, I fought to suspend disbelief. A good novel makes it easier. (  ) wildwily | May 28, 2020 | sin reseñas | añadir una reseña
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There was very good writing here. But the world-building was flawed and detracted from the whole.
A lot of focus was placed on the crossbow and then it essentially disappeared from the novel. This happened a lot: things were central and important and then they stopped being mentioned. I also take issue with the MC. She was very MarySue without being MarySue. Rich, distant parents who lavished her with money, yet she has none of the expected hang ups of entitlement. Survivalist training? The character was too unbelievable.
Not enough time was spent developing the ‘rift’ story and the Kvstm(?).
No noticeable typos. A few instances of knowledge suddenly present that had no source.
In the end, I fought to suspend disbelief. A good novel makes it easier. (