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Cargando... Life With A Billionaire: Billionaire Untamed Obession. The Complete Billionaire Series VOL 1-7 (Billionaire Untamed Obsession Book 8)por Gerald Greene
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I think this story has potential but would benefit from some re-writes. The characters lacked depth and the dialogue was practically non-existent. I liked aspects of the plot and the descriptive writing involving all the locations were decent, but like I said- it was hard to engage fully because of the issues with the writing.
I highly recommend working with the editor and taking another run through and republish it. I'd possibly even re-read it and that point.
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