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Cargando... Combat Wizard: A Paranormal-ESP Thrillerpor Jack L. Knapp
Ninguno Actualmente no hay Conversaciones sobre este libro.  wildwily | May 28, 2020 |   And then the wheels start to fall off. The early chapters have a solid and authentic feel. The ‘magic’ system seems solid and the characters have depth. The nurse shows up and adds to the mix, then...wait, what? Why did she leave? Why did he spills his guts about all of his powers to her seconds after meeting her? What happened to the Colonel? There was ZERO motivation for her to leave. The interlude with the general was out of left field. Insurmountable plot holes killed this for me. I quit just short of halfway through because the nurse shouldn’t have left. Absolutely no reason for her to abandon her post. In fact, leaving complicates their lives to no possible advantage. It was a pointless choice. Clean grammar and spelling. A few acronyms that could’ve been explained better. Massive plot hole. (  ) wildwily | May 28, 2020 | sin reseñas | añadir una reseña
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The School had seemed like the best thing that had ever happened to the man known as 'T'. From drifter to functioning psi, he'd done everything he could to develop his ability.It wasn't enough. The intelligence agency wanted telepaths, not psychokinetics. Meantime, T had grown stronger, something he had not mentioned to the Agency.All that money...what could T do to repay the Agency for their investment? Perhaps another government agency?The Agency sent T to the Army and from there to Afghanistan to evaluate his potential. Could his abilities help soldiers in combat? Meanwhile, the School's administrators had wondered about T. Could they control him? What if he went rogue, turned his abilities against the Agency?There was a simple solution. Devise a way to turn off the paranormal abilities by turning off T. Permanently.Such a good plan. But it soon began to unravel... No se han encontrado descripciones de biblioteca. |
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And then the wheels start to fall off.
The early chapters have a solid and authentic feel. The ‘magic’ system seems solid and the characters have depth. The nurse shows up and adds to the mix, then...wait, what?
Why did she leave? Why did he spills his guts about all of his powers to her seconds after meeting her? What happened to the Colonel?
There was ZERO motivation for her to leave. The interlude with the general was out of left field.
Insurmountable plot holes killed this for me. I quit just short of halfway through because the nurse shouldn’t have left. Absolutely no reason for her to abandon her post. In fact, leaving complicates their lives to no possible advantage. It was a pointless choice.
Clean grammar and spelling. A few acronyms that could’ve been explained better.
Massive plot hole. (