A great slow burn romance packed into a short story. ( )

2,5 stars.

It's sweet and is well written but it have mud feet.

The "conflict" is less than nonexistent; two words and voilà! bye bye conflict. ( )

I liked this. It was a fun story shown through Quinn's eyes who's been in love with Cooper his best friend for over two years. How they finally let their feelings show while at an amusement park was enjoyable.



I do have to agree with another reviewer, that we really don't know much about Cooper except he's someone everyone likes, that he will sleep with just about anyone and that even though he loved Quinn he didn't wait for him, he dated Simon. Cooper says he fell in love with Simon too, but couldn't make it work because he loved Quinn which makes me wonder what positive qualities Cooper has besides being charismatic and buff that Quinn loves about him. We actually learn more about what Simon the ex-boyfriend is like in a few short lines than we ever find out about Cooper.

It's the background of Cooper, and how he treated Simon that doesn't make sense or feel right to me. One final thing that surprised me is that they just didn't rip their clothes off each other once they got back to the hotel and instead Cooper used ice in foreplay. I'm like what? I thought you guys couldn't wait? So color me confused.

I'm thinking this story would have worked out better if it was a full length story because we just don't get enough info about the characters. I think what is the best part of the story is the two finding out they wanted each other and loved each other and how that happens at the park.

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This was so sweet. Quinn has been in love with his best friend for years but the timing never worked out. Now, he and Cooper are spending spring break together with their roommates and they are finally both single at the same time. Quinn is determined to tell Coop how he feels, but Coop is faster. This was a super short story, but I felt like I got a good understanding of the characters and how they got to where they were. I would love more of these guys. ( )