A very short "classical" story: Brendan is a sweet guy, not a stunning one, but with a warm behaviour. He has a five years relationship with Seth, but love life is trouble. Brendan is getting fat and he thinks that the cold behaviour of Seth is due to this and he decides to lose weight and to get in shape to regain his lover. But this is an illusion, is not his looking that cause problem in their relationship and he discover the thruth in the worst way. But maybe Kyle, the owner of the gym he frequent, could be an answer to his dreams.

Brendan is a normal guy, who tries to rescue his relationship changing himself. Unfortunately this is not the right way to do things. One thing I really cannot understand when I read similar situations is why a good man like Brendan can't kick out from his life a dork like Seth when he begins to behaviour like this: it's obvious that he is not the right person, that he can never be the right person. Maybe everyone loves more the love's idea that the lover himself.

The plot is pretty and even if the story is really short, it is enjoyable. Maybe the sex scene are a little to "loud", some phrase I heard are somewhat too crude in the mouth of Brendan, but they also contribute to make the story very hot.