Ridiculously short, but quite sweet. ( )

Ridiculously short, but quite sweet. ( )

This has much depth for such a short short story. The reader is immediately immersed, such that they will have to consider their own role within the fundamental questions the narrative raises. It’s fair to the story to let it explain itself rather than try to share anymore here. ( )

It didn't develop anything, including interest. I think longer could have been better. Two stars is generous. ( )

If you are still not sure of where you are, check out the much better story Stones of Significance also by David Brin. ( )