Short and sweetish (spoilers)

With less than 100 pages this had to be instalust/instalove but it was funny and adorable right up until the misunderstanding worked itself out. Then sweet Devlon turned into something else talking about shooting his seed and dropping f bombs out of context on his virgin Hallowen hookup. The rest of story both before and after the sex is so fun and swoon worthy that part that should have been superhot just read as raunchy, maybe to just get the story to the end. I would have loved a full novel or novella because these four great characters are wasted in the instarush. ( )