Melina Morel

Review Courtesy of AllThingsUrbanFantasy.blogspot.com

Review: *Smolder will be released on January 5, 2010*
I’ll admit that I struggled to get through the first half dozen chapters of Smolder. Things did pick up after that, but not nearly enough. If you read Melina’s earlier Devour and Prey, then you’ve already met some of the many, many characters in Smolder, but its not necessary to have read it, and if its anything like Smolder, I can’t recommend it.

Countess Catherine Marais is part of an elite werewolf hunting society in France known as the Institute (get used to that word, you are going to be reading it a lot if you pick up Smolder). When a wounded werewolf gets away and identifies her to the werewolf community she becomes #1 on their most wanted list. This new threat prompts her 200+ year old vampire lover Ian to start pressuring her to join the ranks of the undead. Meanwhile Catherine’s partner Paul and his now wife Julie want to have a baby, but only if they can be sure it won’t be a werewolf. Throw in an unresolved side plot about cloning, an anxious werewolf leader with a nefarious past and a son with an aversion to joining the pack, and there is more then enough story going on here. The real problem is with the writing.

There is a lot of dialogue in Smolder. Maybe as much as 75/80% dialogue verses 25/30% description. That’s not necessarily a bad thing, if the dialogue is good. But I would venture to say that the dialogue is arguable the weakest part of Smolder. I found it unnatural, tedious, and cheesy in many places.

Then there are the characters. I never felt any connection with Catherine partially because the novel is told from shifting 3rd person perspective, but more so because despite copious amounts of dialogue, very little is revealed about her as a character (except that she really likes vampire sex). Some of the secondary characters have depth (Luc for example as the unwilling teenage werewolf), but there are way too many to keep straight especially with so many foreign names.

I did enjoy the Romeo & Juliet-esque subplot featuring Catherine’s human niece Solange and Luc the werewolf son of the Lupas Minor, and even the scenes where Ian verbally attempts to convince Catherine to become a vampire (95% of the time, however, he tries a more carnal persuasion with lots and lots of repetitively described sex). The main plot of the werewolves trying to kill Catherine was significantly less interesting.

Personal Pet Peeve: While the cover art for Smolder (and Melina’s two other paranormal romances) is gorgeous, apart from the wolf, it in no way reflects the actual book. Catherine looks nothing like the model, she favors guns not swords, and she is never described wearing anything close to the leather ensemble featured on the cover.

To be clear, I didn’t hate this book. I didn’t feel strong emotions about it at all. And having taken a few days to consider Smolder before finishing this review, I’m having a hard time remembering anything about the book that impacted me. So in a sense, Smolder does live up to its title if you consider that it is defined as: to burn slowly and without a flame. But that’s the problem: not one page has any fire.*Smolder will be released on January 5, 2010*

Sexual Content:
Lots and lots of fairly graphic sex scenes (nearly every other chapter).… (más)

First things first, the blurb here I think is a little misleading. First of all, the hunter and Catherine at the end are the same person. But although Catherine is a big player in this story, so is Paul, her partner, and Julie, Paul's lover and a direct decendant of the Montfort werewolf. So I really didn't care for this blurb. I think it could have been put differently.

Anyway, the book started off in France, where Julie meets Paul while she is traveling and when she gets back home to NYC, he asks her to be his translater for the book he wrote about the Montfort werewolf. So she accepts and as the story moves on in time, which is supposed to be over a period of two years, their relationship grows and blooms. Now Catherine is with Ian, although she is not supposed to be, but indulges herself with her love for him. All the while refusing to be changed to a vampire.

The killings start happening and Catherine and Paul and the rest of the Institut start monitoring Pierre. The story does have quite a few surprises, but the plot never changes. They are after this wolf and won't stop till he's captured.

Okay, it was kind of slow and at the end, I really think the sexual happenings between Catherine and Ian didn't have to be there (and she even decided to give in to Ian!). Even throughout the whole story, I knew who was sleeping with who without having to read about it. But maybe that's just me. I did enjoy the book, but I thought it was kind of dry. As I was reading, I kind of knew what was going to happen next. I would figure out that Pierre was going to run. And the rest of the characters were pretty much telling us what was going to happen.

It took me a while to get through this book, but I did finish it and I am giving it an honest review. Maybe it just wasn't for me. I like werewolves and all, but this one I just wasn't feeling. But don't take my word for it, I'd suggest reading it for yourselves! :)… (más)