D.K. Holmberg

I liked this book and have moved on to #2 but don't like the writers predilection to have characters' behave in a manner that doesn't make sense--just to get to a plot point.


We have a main character that listens to literally NO ONE at the academy and only believes what he reads. He is supposedly scared to raise an elemental (but calls on them daily), but thinks its a good idea to try to summon a draasin. But he is such a Marty Sue that he manages to shoulder his way thru every problem except his failing to connect to each element.

I'm hoping that this gets better with #2 because the world that Holmberg has created seems interesting--that's why I'm here.… (más)