Marty Gregor

It's very good for first book, although it's not my style. I could't feel nothing about the main character. I was just a visitor. It was just "I'm doing this, I'm going there, I'm thinking this..." and nothing left for the reader. He travel to amaizing places and there was almost nothing for the most of them, exept the girls :). Nice for a young boy, but not so for the other readers. I like a lot the sense of humor. Anyway congratulations Marty and I'll wait for the other books of yours!