Jamie Agee
Autor de Mandy Cain
Series
Obras de Jamie Agee
Etiquetado
Conocimiento común
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Miembros
Reseñas
Estadísticas
- Obras
- 3
- Miembros
- 3
- Popularidad
- #1,791,150
- Valoración
- 2.0
- Reseñas
- 1
- ISBNs
- 2
There are inconsistencies in Jacob's character too. Even if in the later section (where Jacob discovers his wife's secret) he discovers something about himself as well, this doesn't match up to his reaction to an earlier scene involving his wife and her manager.
So overall, I could see this being rewritten into a very strong story. Just don't think it's at that point yet, especially for one listed as erotica.… (más)