Fun and cute, but a lot of things were brought up very suddenly and dropped just as fast. A few too many distractions. Ended really swiftly too, there was one conflict then, OK all better now! Several good things here, but a real lack of focus. ( )

Slow burn kisses-only f/f fantasy romance with a unique world and default queerness.

Full review on 10/24: www.loveinpanels.com/prose/queen-of-ieflaria ( )

I think ultimately I agree with other reviewers who have said this is an ambitious book that tries to pack too much into too short a narrative. Calvin has designed a rich, complex, lovingly detailed world; unfortunately, there's a *lot* of infodump, especially in the first chapter, and much of that info could have been worked into the narrative more gracefully throughout the book. (And, additionally, some of it could have just been left out altogether for the sake of giving more time to plot and character development.) The relationship has possibilities and I liked seeing some of the ways Adale grew in response to it, but at the end I wasn't sure I bought the great, passionate love the characters professed for each other--the potential for it, sure, but I wasn't convinced that potential had blossomed during the novel. There were interesting seeds of ideas throughout the book--from the politics to the perception of science vs. religion--that didn't sufficiently develop, and that's a shame. Aside from having potential on their own, fleshing those possibilities out really could have breathed more life into all of the characters and made them more complex.

This is not a bad book at all, really. If you're interested, it's worth checking out. But it's not the book it could have been, and that's a sad loss of potential. I plan to read one of the later books in the series and see how Calvin has grown as a writer since this one. ( )

My experience with this story ended up being a pleasant surprise. I say that despite all the criticism i am going to give. Even with the problems, it was still a fun read with some great content. Even for a fantasy newbie like me, it drew me in with the setting.

First off, the characters were easily the best part of the story. Esofi and Adale are both well established characters. Both sides of the story are fun to read as well see very different perspectives on the arranged marriage. One thing that i was genuinely surprised by was the fact that the story doesnt make a huge point of condemning arranged marriages. From my experiences in other forms of media, that seems to be a trend. I thought this story took a balanced approach at examining the idea. While some might not agree with the idea, at least the story took the time to approach the concept from multiple perspectives.

Another thing i thought the story did well was capturing the feeling of grief. Very rarely do i see a story give me a sense of the void the character feels with the lose of a loved one. Albions death clearly left a massive void in Adales life, and we see that sprinkled throughout the story.

The biggest problem the story had was focus. The story was at its best when it was a smaller scaled story focused on the arranged marriage. The addition of other possible love interests was fine, but its when the main plot gets started that things fell of the rails. People gaining magical abilities seemed very abrupt and forced the story into focusing on that for almost half a chapter. Having now finished the story, i can say without a doubt that i wouldnt have minded that part being cut entirely. It didnt add anything and if anything, it made the twins holding a ball harder to buy into considering they were just starting to learn to control their powers.

The dragons were definitely interesting, and if the story's focus had to shift, im glad that it was to the dragons. The whole concept really should have had its own story to focus on it because as it is, its more potential than a fully realized idea. The final confrontation with the dragons felt unearned given we just realized they could speak. At least Adale had some good character growth during this part.

I suppose the problem with the split focus between the romance and the main plot is that neither felt particularly well realized. The romance has its moments, but it doesnt have the pull a romance usually does. The plot is interesting, but not enough time is given to it to make it a great story. The ending felt rushed and unfortunately, we probably wont be seeing the characters in another story. The character interactions are great, but there just arent enough of them. There is plenty of drama, but the drama close to the climax feels very forced and ultimately kind of useless. I could criticise other aspects of the story, but i feel as though i have complained enough.

I do enjoy this story though. I think the characterization, interactions and world really make this an enjoyable read. Despite feeling rushed, i liked the ending a lot. The action was fun and it made for some great scenes. I definitely recommend giving this a shot if you are like me and love lesfic, but are reluctant to try fantasy. While probably not the best example, it feels like the kind of fantasy that will get me to read more fantasy. It is also not super expensive if you are curious. Worth reading for sure ( )

Lacks a strong antagonistic force, so there's very little tension. ( )